Moricz-[Redacted] Comments Archive Part 1: March 23rd-April 28th 2009

Comments on "Preludes and Nocturnes" Chapter 7. Retrieved March 23rd, 2009.

[Redacted] commented on 23 March 2009 at 3:12 PM EST

Ah!!! They finally meet! I did so love the teaser at the end.This story has a way of always wondering what will happen next. I'll be in school one day, drawing or writing when I'm supposed to be working, and then- I'll think "Hmm...I wonder if Preludes and Nocturnes will be updated today?" It is at this point where my teachers will yell at me for being a horrible straight A student. >.>
But really, lovely chapter as always, and I can't wait for the next! Also, daydreaming Liszt is simply adorable. :3

Moricz commented on 23 March 2009 at 2:48 PM PST:

Thank you! I love to hear that you so enjoy the story! =D Haha, I feel horrible straight A student is a bit contradictory, eh? =p Thank you very much ;) It was fun writing a party scene. =D

Comments on "A Long Rendezvous Chapter 2" Retrieved March 26th, 2009.

Moricz commented on 25 March 2009 at 12:56 PM PST

Oh poor Franz with his downstair neighbour! And poor George, being wet from the rain and such =( But that aside, I find George absolutely adorable! =D And your writing's very thorough and flows along beautifully. I look forward to reading more, and wonder with great curiosity what is going to happen next! ;)

[Redacted] commented on 25 March 2009 at 4:30 PM EST:

Oh yes... well, George becomes...less...adorable XD Thanks for the nice comment, and I should post the next chapter tomorrow or Saturday.

Moricz commented on 25 March 2009 at 3:30 PM PST:

Oh XD. is that tragedy I sense? : ) You're welcome =D I look forward to reading it (hopefully tomorrow)! ;)

Comments on "Preludes and Nocturnes Chapter 7. Retrieved March 29th, 2009.

[Redacted] commented on 28 March 2009 at 4:15 PM EST:

You pulled that off quite well! =) I do so look forward, as usual for the next chapter. Naughty George, thinking about wittle Frederic during such...questionable...circumstances! XD I have a long sense of dread in my heart for Marie. Now, I think that I will post my next chapter sometime this week, so keep on the look out and keep writing!

Moricz commented on 28 March 2009 at 3:43 PM PST:

Thank you! =D I was chuckling when writing that part of the chapter; naughty George! XD That is great! I will definately be on the look out for your story ;)

Comments on "A Long Rendezvous Chapter 3" Retrieved March 31st, 2009.

Moricz commented on 30 March 2009 at 2:59 PM PST:

I now see what you meant when you said George won't be as adorable as the story progresses, but I still find her extremely interesting(and maybe still a little adorable)! =D Wonderful chapter! I'd love to see Chopin join in the fun, and hope poor Mallefille will turn out alright should George give up her seduction. And Franz! Haha, I can't imagine trying to find a specific piano in a city as vast as Paris - my best of luck to the man. : ) Hope to see more soon!

[Redacted] commented on 30 March 2009 at 8:48 PM EST:

Ah yes...that piano... *shifts eyes* Anyways, Chopin will be quite different in this story than the other ones. Shall we say...more wry? He isn't amused by the goings on at Franz's house. He seems more wise than young, foolish Franz. Alas, I cannot give anymore away, as that would ruin the story! Hope you had fun, and thanks for reading! :D I might start updating on Wednesdays too.

Comments on "Preludes and Nocturnes Chapter 8" Retrieved April 4th, 2009.

[Redacted] commented on 3 April 2009 at 3:37 PM EST:

Ahhh I just got home! Poor Marie hit her head...Poor Franz got yelled at... Poor Chopin...he's sick. Where's George? Is she sad too? :*( great chapter as always!

Moricz commented on 3 April 2009 at 5:39 PM PST:

Life is tough for most of the characters it seems XD George will be reappearing in a chapter or two : ) Thank you! =D

[Redacted] commented on 3 April 2009 at 8:48 PM EST:

Hmmm...what will happen in the two chapters to come... Marie is mad at Franz, Franz gave George Chopin's address last chapter...and Chopin is all alone...hmmm..;)

Moricz commented on 3 April 2009 at 7:30 PM PST:

Haha! I actually never took notice of the whole picture/situation like that, BUT now that you said's true! ;) Something will happen, though probably not to the extent we hope for yet(that will be coming up), but something definately will! =D

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Comments on "A Long Rendezvous Chapter 4" Retrieved April 7th, 2009.

Moricz commented on 6 April 2009 at 2:38 PM PST:

Haha! Marie Marie! The last part reminds me of the next chapter I will be posting - Marie somehow always ends up opening the door and finding unexpected company, eh? "Are you his lover?" I just about fell out of my chair; way to be blunt! Anyways, yes, excuse my excited chatter. I love how you cleverly showed insight into Chopin and George's relationship; who better to tell than Marie d'Agoult! "All he does is paint dead things" HAHA! I had quite a chuckle upon reading that one =D I still find George adorable; the impression you've left in the second chapter is quite strong on me still ; ) Wonderful, wonderful, my dear! Brava! =D

[Redacted] commented on 6 April 2009 at 6:43 PM EST:

YAY! Approval! George is adorable in her own respects, I suppose. Poor Marie and her bad luck. She's very suspicious isn't she? I read a biography on her before writing this, and she seemed to me as very suspicious. Marie does love her gossip, eh? In this work of fiction, Delecroix acts as a catalyst somewhere in one of the relationships (not spoiling though!) I should update Friday or Saturday, and while no one new comes into play, we still have George, Marie, Liszt, and Chopin in a high-tension situation. What could possibly go wrong? Don't answer that. Hint: That piano is more important and less mysterious than it appears. :D Thank you so much for the long and darling comment! I so appreciate your approval!

Moricz commented on 6 April 2009 at 4:15 PM PST:

Yes, I agree; I think her mentality was a bit unstable. Poor girl : ( But her suspiciousness works wonderfully for the story! ; ) Haha! I am looking forward to the update even more now =D You're very welcome! And I do wonder about that piano....hmmm....

Comments on "Preludes and Nocturnes Chapter 9" Retrieved April 10th, 2009.

[Redacted] commented on 9 April 2009 at 3:20 PM EST:

I. Love. You. That was the sweetest, cutest, most beautiful thing I have seen in a while. You pulled it off beautifully, and managed to stay flawlessly in character. I applaud you. I was just going to log off, when I saw my little banner at the top of my screen saying I had a new post..and well...This made my day!

Moricz commented on 9 April 2009 at 5:19 PM PST:

Thank you so incredibly much for the kind comment! (blushing emoticon) This chapter took longer to write than most of the others, and I'm glad you like it! =D Thank you, truly : )

Comments on "A Long Rendezvous Chapter 5" Retrieved April 14th 2009.

Moricz commented on 12 April 2009 at 10:17 AM PST:

Poor Franz indeed; even Marie's left him! :( Now George on the other hand....naughty writer! XD Flirting with Liszt and Chopin right in front of their eyes! I think....I am loving her even more now =D Though adorable Chopin is also very lovely; hard to do wonder what's happened to darling Mallefille, and what George is going to do to drunken Frederic. I tip my hat and bow to this wonderful chapter; I will, once again, anxiously wait for the next update! =D

[Redacted] commented on 12 April 2009 at 2:30 PM EST:

Aww thanks so much! (heart) a mess. And what is she going to do to drunken Frederic? Hmm, doesn't it seem a bit early for those kinds of thoughts? XD I love George though. She's just endearing, perhaps in the same way as other femme fatales. If one looks closely enough, one can see little hints throughout the story. ;) But here's a hint: Marie didn't see George when he left Franz alone with Frederic. and...Poor Frederic. That's all I'm going to say. Glad you liked it , and I should update on Wednesday or somewhere close to that!

Moricz commented on 12 April 2009 at 1:51 PM PST:

Haha! I agree; I have the strongest urge to give George a hug! =D It makes me wonder what had happened to make her the way she is. Oh no! What had happened to poor Frederic? Then I look forward to Wednesday approaching! I have many questions and curiousities ; )

[Redacted] commented on 12 April 2009 at 4:15 PM EST:

Hmmm..what did happen indeed? XD and about posting on Wednesday- it depends on whether or not I finish this biology project. :| But I shall be diligent!

Moricz commented on 12 April 2009 at 3:07 PM PST:

I remember doing those in highschool =D They are fun sometimes, but are usually quite time consuming. I shall wait patiently, but eagerly. : )

[Redacted] commented on 12 April 2009 at 8:39 PM EST:

It took me four hours, but I'm done with it. It's ugly, but it's scientifically correct. :/ It's taken me loads of debating what the next chapter should feature. I'm afraid that with the choices I've made, Berlioz and the others won't arrive in Paris until much later. And boy do they arrive XD

Moricz commented on 12 April 2009 at 5:43 PM PST:

Congratulations on finishing the biology project! =D That's alright; do what you wish to do ; ) Always leave it to Hector Berlioz to make an entrance, eh? =D

[Redacted] commented on 13 April 2009 at 3:21 PM EST:

Oh and boy does he! But I am at a block. I already have plans for Liszt and Marie, but I'm sort of stuck on Berlioz and Liszst. But since the fact that they met at a dinner party Marie hosted is a historical fact, I shall go with this and see how long it will take for the story to take flight from there. And I came to school, and my bio teacher said my project was all wrong. So I spent three hours today redoing it. Now I wish I didn't have DNA, as irrational as that may sound.

Moricz commented on 13 April 2009 at 2:33 PM PST:

I'm sure you can work something out. (heart) I had writer's block as well, but sometimes not thinking about it helps, as silly as that sounds. Yes, I believe that is a good idea : ) Oh my goodness :( I'm so sorry to hear that. It is fine now though, correct? : )

[Redacted] commented on 13 April 2009 at 6:12 PM EST:

Yes. It is fine, but every time I walk past it, I feel somewhat compelled to smash it... I just got an idea! Involving a door, card games, pianos, and Delecroix. Wow, loathing biology does treat writer's block. Now, if I could possibly turn this into a pill, I will be rich! I write in biology. But only because I get a whole row to myself! :D That's also my art-appreciation (comic-reading and drawing) class... >_> I think I have an A...

Moricz commented on 13 April 2009 at 3:32 PM PST:

Haha! Poor biology project XD Interesting idea you have there! I would love such a pill ; ) Goodness, your biology class sounds quite fun with all that comic-reading and such! =D

Comments on "Preludes and Nocturnes" Chapter 10 Retrieved April 19th, 2009.

[Redacted] commented on 18 April 2009 at 3:47 PM EST:

LOL FRANZ!!!! (Now that was a downright mean plot twist in lieu of all of the fluff, but anyways) Yay, everyone's happy again! Please tell me, however, that the Chopin x Sand pairing comes back! But Franz...Franz is just too much XD. Anyways, excellent chapter, as usual, but something tells me that things do get better for our two protagonists. Right? Right? Ooh, and I've uploaded another chapter! (heart) And I am going to introduce more characters into this one. :D I felt like leaving a long comment.

Moricz commented on 18 April 2009 at 2:18 PM PST:

Haha! Thank you for the cute comment! =D Yes, you can tell I had lots of fun writing this one, eh? ;) And also yes, there will definately be more plot for Chopin and Sand. : ) And that's great! I will go check that out =D

[Redacted] commented on 18 April 2009 at 6:49 PM EST:

Oh yay! More Chopin and Sand! (heart) and yes...I could tell you had fun. My favourite line: "What happened to Franz?!"
"I ate him. Added pepper, tasted lovely-" LOL That was just priceless. Oh, and thanks for reading my story (heart)

Moricz commented on 18 April 2009 at 6:30 PM PST:

Haha! Thank you! =D I felt cheeky as I wrote the latter part of the chapter. No problem at all, my dear; it was a pleasure. : )

Comments on "A Long Rendezvous Chapter 6" Retrieved April 19th, 2009.

Moricz commented on 18 April 2009 at 2:35 PM PST:

Oh poor Franz's kitten! ....and, of course, Chopin leaving him and such XD Poor George as well....can't even bed a drunken man without having to go through all that wailing and frailing - though it was very amusing =D The suspense is killing me! Please don't tell me poor George is going to be tricked into being that ugly friend's mistress! : ( Oh George, as much as I adore you, please don't do it!! ....Please excuse that little bit XD With that aside, wonderful work as usual! I especially love how well you can build a mood so naturally and effectively into the story =D

[Redacted] commented on 18 April 2009 at 6:12 PM EST:

Thank you so much for your compliment! As a writer, it really boosts the morale. Chopin comes back after next chapter! Who knows what George will do? XD But someone important is going to come into the story in the same chapter as when Chopin returns. Chapter seven will be short, but Chapter Eight will be very long. The suspense is killing me too, don't worry! And I am glad you adore George. I rather adore her as well. She's a guilty pleasure to write. :D I think I'm going to go play violin.

Moricz commented on 18 April 2009 at 7:15 PM PST

You're very welcome! Ah, Chopinetto! Now I wonder who that important person is....I will once again be anxiously waiting =D She sure is! Haha! I envy you musicians!

Comments on "Preludes and Nocturnes Chapter 11." Retrieved April 25th, 2009.

[Redacted] commented on 24 April 2009 at 3:34 PM EDT

Poor Chopinetto! I want to hug him. Way to go George, you meanie. XD she still manages to crack me up to no end! Poor Franz. Everyone's sad again! :'( Awesome, amazing, fantastic chapter as always, dahling. :D Hope I get to read more soon! (heart)

Moricz commented on 24 April 2009 at 4:16 PM PDT

Dear Chopin (and perhaps even Liszt) could use a hug or two to bring up his mood =( George Sand seems to be of the few who's very happy at this point. Her quirkiness is a little infectious; I feel unable to let go of it....but I'm glad it offers amusement! =D Thank you very much my dear! I have a freer weekend this time, so I will be writing ;)

Comments on "Preludes and Nocturnes Chapter 12" Retrieved April 29th, 2009.

[Redacted] commented on 28 April 2009 at 10:15 PM EDT

Awww~ George! Ahh, Maria! We haven't seen her in so long! :D Poor Franz. Poor Marie. And Chopin...I don't think he's that poor, just paranoid and terrified of George. XD I think George has a soft spot. She's not the woman of steel we all think she is, eh? Hmmm ;) Anyways, Amazing chapter as always! I was just checking my messages one last time before I nodded off (It's 10:00) and lo and behold! I get my fix, and now I will have lovely dreams with lovely background music :)

Moricz commented on 28 April 2009 at 7:27 PM PDT

I rather miss the dear young Polish lady : ) She hasn't come back in chapters! Poor paranoid Chopin indeed! =D Yes, I believe she can be quite lovely when she wants to be; only when she wants to be ;) Thank you very much! =D You play music while you sleep?

[Redacted] commented on 28 April 2009 at 10:39 PM EDT

Yes...I put my TV on the Classical Satellite channel, and eventually I'll nod off... (as long as Chopin or Liszt isn't playing, I'll usually sleep) Please don't tell me darling Maria isn't going to walk in on anything? Or find evidence of George XD. This just keeps getting better and better!

Moricz commented on 28 April 2009 at 8:12 PM PDT

Haha! Falling asleep to Liszt....Blasphemy!! XD Hmmmm maybe....? Haha, I won't say much, but all in good time ;) Thank you incredibly my dear! =D